Classmate Reaction

I recently read Olivia Dawson's news media critique, and from the opening paragraph I couldn't look away from the screen. Her opening paragraph was very intriguing, which is an essential for good writing. Olivia followed up the strong lead-in paragraph with a lot of description as to why it failed to meet the yardstick of newsworthiness. Also, she finishes with a shut-down idea in which she states that the story is unimportant due to the lack of lawful repercussions. Overall her critique was very well written and she obviously put a lot of thought into each sentence. Great job Olivia!