Thursday, November 6, 2014

Classmate Review: Maddy Williams

While reading Maddy's blog about television, I was felt like I was getting the information, but not really understanding what she was saying. She gave the information, but not with details or examples. She says, "Television comes with many positive impacts but also some negative." This is a great lead, but she only goes on to list one negative impact. She fails to mention a positive effect of television such as the communal experience. She touches on the impact of Political ads, but she doesn't mention if it is positive or negative. I think that if she had given examples in her writing her blog would be one of the best I've seen among our class.


Maddy's TV Response

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